Not bad. ^He's right though^ Use more energy, specifically on the rapping parts. Put more power in it. Guitar is pretty good. I like your other works though. Heart of Gold is nice.
The singing does come across a bit breathless, it would sound better if the vocals were fuller. The rhythm guitar was fine, but the lead seemed a bit off at times, just not very tight. Can't think of much more to say. Just think the vocals sounded too weak(not in terms of pitch, just tone,timbre)
So many possibilities, so little ability.

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You know you're a guitar player when you tell your father what note he's yelling at you in and then improvise over the top.