#1
poison my thoughts one last time,
i'll taste your glory and show no pain,
while the glass is half full ,
on the other side it's almost empty,
it's like the story unfolds with no hope for an ending,

i'll take what you have to give,
til my palms whither away,
i'll reach for the stars,
even though they won't exist anymore,

shadows fill what once use to care,
now the place is over taken,
and all i can do is stare,
I wish i had you to be there,
but the tide rolls in and your no longer aware,

i'll take what you have to give,
til my palms whither away,
i'll reach for the stars,
even though they won't exist anymore,

with the echoes of my past,
marching through my head,
I no longer know where to begin,
stuck with my fingers in the sky,
and a wish for one last night,
the signal comes in,
with no receiver in the end
#2
i enjoyed reading this,
sorry but i'm not that great of a critic
pringa


Are you taking over? Or are you taking orders?
Are you going backwards? Or are you going forwards?


#3
is this song actually about anything concrete? The chorus doesn't appear to refer to anything, or make sense of the verses. If you're going to be abstract and figurative, there should be some consistency and some clue as to what youre talking about/what the point of the song is.
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#4
This song is pretty much about a guy who trys everything to be with this girl, in the chorus it's talking about taking all the pain she causes even if it can't be mentally taken at the time, but the reach for the stars part is describing when he sets his goals on something it never comes true! on the next verse he's getting hopeless for his dream of this girl and he's realizing that she really dosen't care that he's there,
and for the last part verse he's thinking about all the things they once did together, he's finally realized that he can't get her and he's hopeless holding on to past memories without her to remember them!