Just a little something i recorded the other day.
Have a listen and tell me what you think. It's in the profile and I named it "summer".

It's not a bad song, but I think it could use some more work. First thing you need to do is buy a microphone instead of plugging in the acoustic. (I used to do this as well, but I got a mic and now have many more options.) The intro made me think that this was going to be a generic punk song, but it turns out that it wasn't. The chord progression didn't really go anywhere and made me get bored pretty quickly. The solo overtop didn't have any enormous flaws, but I felt like you were repeating yourself constantly. You didn't make any playing mistakes that I could hear. Most of your mistakes were in song structure and recording.

Crit mine?
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