#4
hehe, while I enjoyed it in a funny way, it was a bit weird. Kinda sounded like a joke song to be honest :P
#5
It was musically an okay song, but the whole thing seemed very strange to me, and even a bit surreal.
I'm a person.
#6
well,.. i tried to do something new, originaly, something that no-one had heard, but, honesty, it looks like very simple pop song..
#8
Hey.. thanks for criticism .. Now I think maybe I should change chords and do a bit metal with powerchords }