#3
good playing, good chord medley, my only crit would be to watch out for your chromatics, sometimes they dont sound so hot, work on the note placement, thats a challenge that is not easily overcome. very cool sounding progression and stuff, you should carry it into a song. thanks for the crit by the way!
#6
heyhey it was not horrible considering it was improv. You seemed to go off the key/scale, sometimes it was nice (with the harmoic minor), but the chromatics seemed off as said before. Also try switching up the bass note to give it a little more variation and kick.

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=683903
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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