Oh boy, you have that annoying voice down that I don't like out of pop punk.

As for the instrumental ability, pretty kick ass. Many parts, none seem out of place. Your opening was hell of crazy, especially the bassline, that was kickin for sure. The double vocals sound cool throughout, that is what you did right? My ears might be tricking me.

Maybe make the song shorter.
Last edited by dave bigdaddio at Oct 1, 2007,
There was a lot going on in that song and you guys kept it together very well. I'm not a fan of the style of vocals but you do do a god job with them. Nice work dude.
The vocals aren't really my style of vocals, kind of annoyed me. Not that they are bad though.

Other than that I absolutely loved it, the guitar is great. It's very catchy. As much as I don't like them, the vocals need to go up. They are way too low. Good stuff though!