#1
Thoughts?


i think i'm waiting for a heartbeat
for you to know that i havent left you yet
i'm sick of the things i know i can't say
but no, i havent left you yet

to see you lying there
is just more than i can take
and there's nothing i wouldnt do
to be the one to take your place
and as the clouds roll off in the distance
i feel your breath upon my face
something clicks within that moment
and i know i'll never be the same

something came to life inside of me
something you cant ever take away

dont tell me it'll all just be ok
i've heard it all before
dont tell me tomorrow's just another day
i just cant take it no more
i dont want to take it no more

sitting alone now
in a dark excuse for a room
my mind drifts back to that parking lot
my mind drifts back to you
all those late night conversations
of all our stupid hesitations
and how we just couldn't of dared
i dont think i could forget this
i dont think i'll ever forget this...

but to see you there,
lying there,
with nothing that,
i could do.
it hurts inside,
and stings my eyes,
there's nothing that,
i could do.
i wish i could,
take it back,
i wish i could,
take it back,
i wish i could,
take it back,
i swear to god,
i'd take it back.

dont tell me it'll all just be ok
i've heard it all before
dont tell me tomorrow's just another day
i just cant take it no more
i dont want to take it no more
no more
no more
no more

but there's nothing that i could do
nothing that i could do
nothing that i could do
noth-ing that i can do
i want to just be with you
i want to just be with you
i want to just be with you

i love you.
#2
this is one of the few songs i have read and i actually have a beat going in my head cuz the flow is so good. good job on this song, i will do some more critting tomorrow when i get the time so its a little more specific cuz theres just a few little things i would change. if u get the chnce check mine out

My Song:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=681879