you're pretty good, man, and you have like the exact same influences as me. I fyou didn't live in texas I'd want to have a band with you or something. peace.
Very honest lyrics. I never write that literally, because it always risks being too cheesy. Not the case here, songs pretty good.

Add some harmonies to it! It'd be huge! I can hear them in my head, and I'm 100% certain it would be awesome.

Ah, and as for the S sounds.. Notice how the reverb picks those up so nicely? Find out what frequency that is , and then lower the damping frequency to just below that.

Nice work!

If you got some time,

Agile AL-3100 (highly recommended)
SX SST57 strat copy
OE30 Hollowbody
SX fretless bass
Epiphone PR-200 acoustic
Yamaha G-40 classical
Epiphone Valve Junior head
1x12 custom cab
4x12 Behringer Half-stack

My Solo Stuff

My Band

stuff sounds good, i like it a lot. and i think your voice is pretty good too, much better than mine...