#1
Just a song I wrote up.

The blood of the wicked
flows in my viens
I thought I could stick it
But it gives me these pains
I need
A Saviour
I see
Unwanted behaviour

Somewhere
out there
Something watching over me
I feel the pull it bears
Everythime I strike a lie
Somewhere
It's there to watch me bleed

When a tree falls in the forest
No one hears a crash
When you thought you did your best
No one hears you thrash
I need
A saviour
Is see
The Unfavor

Somewhere
out there
Something watching over me
I feel the pull it bears
Everythime I strike a lie
Somewhere
It's there to watch me bleed

This life of strife
The feeling of
rejection
It all comes
down to this
final time
As you watch me
Drown
#2
Imaginitive, I liked the way it was full of I suppose one could say emotion. Vivid imagery simply makes it magnificant in it's simplicity. Bravo, kudos to you. Keep on writing.