its wanktastic! but all the leads sorta leave it one dimensional. maybe get some re-structuring and different parts to it will make it more dynamic
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I thought its sounded cool...there were a couple of parts where the lead wasnt as good as the rest of the lead however I thought most of it sounded pretty cool...nice recording quality as well.
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