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okay. so this already exists.. but it was locked due to the visual pollution in the title.

my apologies. I also decided to wait a day or two before reposting so there wouldn't be two copies floating around on the same page.

thank you to those who posted critiques before the previous copy was locked.

so i usually write metal. but had a nice vision for an acoustic type tune i was thinking about. just came up with these words to describe that vision.

enjoy, and as always C4C


The Wondrous Green

The ground so soft
beneath my heavy boots
birds sing to each other
while dew drips from the trees

the air heavy in my lungs
with the zen perfume
of pine and ceders
hush the nattering of my thoughts

i find my peace
in the wondrous green

i find peace in the wondrous green


i drift to slumber tho the sun still beams
the roof of leaves allow my eyes
rest from the lights.
only the sneakiest of rays
light the hungry plants beside me

the peace within is
as the peace without
to the songs of fluttering wings
and dancing leaves.

i find my peace
in the wondrous green

i find peace in the wondrous green.

it would be something special
if i could take root in the spot i lay in
it would be in my dreams,
that my skin becomes the moss i lay in
it would be my wish
to be the air that smells of this zen perfume.


i find my peace
in the wondrous green

I find peace in the wondrous green
Grammar and spelling omitted as an exercise for the reader.