it needs a chorus & isn't finished yet, but what do you think so far?

Honey, the lights in your eyes are just blinding. Please turn them down.
And honey, you know I’m surprised that I’m finding, I’m falling for you
The veins running down your face are cold as ice cos you have no faith
Like branches, lit up by the moon
They shine out black within the gloom
If only you weren’t so cold, then maybe you’d see. Just open your eyes
Just try not to be so blind. You’d be so smart if you opened your mind/