This is anoter song i wrote ages ago for my band - but they decided not to use it - so it sat on my computer for ages and just thought of a way to use it put iit up here lol

i migh use it when i start my own mini-side/solo project later this month

please feel free to crit

Machine Head inspired
Last edited by Mcleody at Oct 3, 2007,
quite good =]

I'd add some variation to that main verse riff tho, it gets quite repetitive =\
other than that, quite nice =]

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the intro didn't really do anything for me, but i like the verse quite a bit. the chorus is good as well. bridge is my favorite part. i think a rest in between bars 77 and 78 would make that part much cooler.

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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho