#2
i liked the intro, and the lead guitar is working well with the sound of the intro, but the part i especially liked the piano break, and the way that each bar transitions into the next. the only problems I have with it are that sometimes the bass sounds kinda funny, and that the drums sometimes kinda kill the mood (bar 26?). oh yeah I really liked that arpeggio part which starts at bar 106 i think, that is awesome.

crit mine plez? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=684821