My light shines on - Hopefully going to be filled into a song about making it big as a musician

I sit alone in my room,
The critics have had their say,
My heart's started aching,
My hope has faded away,
But my faith,
Has stayed true,
My dreams are still as one,
And throughout the dark,
My light shines on

These are the first lyrics i've ever really written, so i don't really know too much about it but any help or comments appreciated
Last edited by JimmyStradlin33 at Oct 4, 2007,