#1
This is a song I finally finished lyrics for. It took me long enough ( a year)

If you like 311 Chili Peppers or Incubus or even RATM you may enjoy this, hope you do anyways, let me know what you think!

"Delay Finished"

http://mattblackwell.dmusic.com/
My username is old, don't judge me (but old 311 is good)
#2
Chorus is definitely RHCP sounding. Yeah dude, I'm hearing 311 and RATM all over the place here, haha. Very chill song. I enjoyed it. Well constructed.

The vocals seem a little lack luster. Like you weren't using enough energy when you recorded them. Kind of sounds like you're bored...

-Dan
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=685472
Check out "Instrumental" if you get the time, please. Thanks.
#3
Quote by p4wnkkthx
Chorus is definitely RHCP sounding. Yeah dude, I'm hearing 311 and RATM all over the place here, haha. Very chill song. I enjoyed it. Well constructed.

The vocals seem a little lack luster. Like you weren't using enough energy when you recorded them. Kind of sounds like you're bored...

-Dan
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=685472
Check out "Instrumental" if you get the time, please. Thanks.



Thank you for the feedback! Ya I don't know if it's my voice, way I record, or what, I've heard that from other people before too...I was really into it soo, it's gotta have somethin to do with my tone and inflection I think. If you've got any advice I'm ready to listen...

Glad you enjoyed it though! and I'm a guitarist at heart
My username is old, don't judge me (but old 311 is good)
#4
sounded pretty good. sounds a lot like rhcp maybe a little too much but that's cool , though you should sing with more energy maybe a little screaming?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=623491
#5
Quote by jAzZMataZz
sounded pretty good. sounds a lot like rhcp maybe a little too much but that's cool , though you should sing with more energy maybe a little screaming?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=623491


Hey, gotta start somewhere right man? Ha, this is basically my first foray into really trying to write good vocals and stuff. and yes looks like I'll be doing another take of the vocals very soon here.

Goin to the link now..
My username is old, don't judge me (but old 311 is good)