Overall I thought the melody line was very nice. A little predictable but it's nice and peaceful. The backing track/rhythm is great also, and you have a nice tone. Great bluesy run there in the middle, and that other fill closer to the end is good too. I'm a little more critical of solo guitar pieces considering it's my main instrument. Try thinking and playing a bit more outside of the box to work on note selection. Also, you obviously fat-fingered a few notes (although you may have just been nervous); keep practicing and you'll get the precision. For the most part, your playing is clean and the song is well written. You have great potential.

Last edited by denizenz at Oct 5, 2007,
listening now...i like the synthy intro. The fisrt note solo was very predictable, but you follwed it up nicely. I like the note selection alot. Reminds me of somethin i would make up actually. You have to work on your bends a little and vibrato. Theres no time gauge but about half way through you hit a note very out of key. Very emotional its ****in awesome man.

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