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I anxiously wait for your arrival,
Ever since the night before,
You show up beautiful as always,
As I reach out for your hand.

And we’ll walk this unbeaten path if I had it my way,
A gentle snowfall flowing from the hills,
The moon-flow shines down from above,
Oh what the perfect night.

The whisperings of the willows,
Direct me to the truth,
Of why it would be me and you.

I’d draw you near, and whisper softly,
Seeking for the answers in your heart.
I catch a glimpse of how you feel.
Ask myself is this truly real?
Could I really be so lucky?

And we’ll walk this unbeaten path if I had it my way,
A gentle snowfall flowing from the hills,
The moon-flow shines down from above,
Would it happen tonight?

The whisperings of the willows,
Direct me to the truth,
Of why it would be me and you.

With each secret you unveil,
I relax, and breathe easy.
The doubt creeps out,
As I pull you in,
Would this be okay?

And we’ll walk this unbeaten path if I had it my way,
A gentle snowfall flowing from the hills,
The moon-flow shines down from above,
Would it happen tonight?

The whisperings of the willows,
Direct me to the truth,
Of why it would be me and you.

My mind races as I reach around,
Betraying my original plan,
But you adjust, and a feeling of trust
Flows to me from you.

And we’ll walk this unbeaten path if I had it my way,
A gentle snowfall flowing from the hills,
The moon-flow shines down from above,
I wish I finnaly had it right.

I wrote for one of those femine-type friends, so I'd like some critique before I sing it tommarow.

Edit: And of course I'd be glad to critique yours.
#2
Quote by MrSnugglewuffle
The doubt creeps out...

At first I thought that said, "The doubt creeps you out." To which I would have lawled.

But anyway. It's pretty.

You can critique my "Bloody Risotto," if you can find it.
There's only one girl in the world for you
and she probably lives in Tahiti.
#3
I'm actually running through it with the chords, and I am starting to think it sounds better if I switch the Willows paragraph with the unbeaten path paragraph, what do you guys think?