#1
This is the demo version for my song "shadows of the mind". Please ignore the vocals as they were rushed and I was sick.

When I listen this this, it just doesn't give me that "man this paid off" kinda feeling. I spent alot of time on the riffs and ALOT of time on the drums but it just doesn't feel right.

I'm re-recording this for my self-release CD soon and I want some suggestions on how to make it better. thanks in advance!


http://locker.myyearbook.com/backpackfiles/2007/09/04/15/audio46ddb2498156a.mp3
#2
crazy bassline maybe? something along the lines of spirit crusher or something, i dunno..... sounded fine though
Guitar:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Jackson DK2-L w/ Dimarzio X2N
Takamine acoustic

Bass:
Fender Precision Bass

Amp:
Marshall AVTX150H
Behringer BG412F
Marshall MG15MSII
#3
Quote by SeventhSkull
crazy bassline maybe? something along the lines of spirit crusher or something, i dunno..... sounded fine though


I was aiming for a spirit crusher style song too, but that song has so much more.... i don't know. excitement?