#1
Just uploaded this.

It's pretty heavy in the riffing section and there is a bit of synth which gives it a bit of a Symphony X kind of sound. There is a guitar solo and a keyboard solo and then it goes into a rip off of Beethoven's 5th Symphony at the end.


Check It Out C4C


http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Donkey+Fly/
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'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#2
nice riffage! good to see you on the forums again. i see you practiced the palm mutes like i suggested! nice breakdown. soloing was good. tapping was pretty awsome. you've really improved. one thing i noticed was that this song doesn't really flow to well, especially the transitions to and from from the solo parts.

i don't have any thing for you to crit right now, but i'll hit you up later for some crits
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#3
you've got some pretty nice riffs in there, your palm muting is especially good. crazy fast alternate picking too. the part where the tempo slowed up (breakdown?) sounded really cool. the only suggestions i give are to make the transitions better to the tapping part, and make the tapping come in more precisely on time.

c4c?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=684821
#4
Quote by chrisatgrace
nice riffage! good to see you on the forums again. i see you practiced the palm mutes like i suggested! nice breakdown. soloing was good. tapping was pretty awsome. you've really improved. one thing i noticed was that this song doesn't really flow to well, especially the transitions to and from from the solo parts.

i don't have any thing for you to crit right now, but i'll hit you up later for some crits


Thanks, i haven't been on much lately due to alot of coursework and stuff.

Just post your song up when you get one and ill get on it.

Flap it and enjoy yourself...

Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#6
hey,

i real liked the song when you had added the ambience in the background, it worked well with the heavy riffs over the top. like above, i think the transition into the solo could be a little more accurate, it sounds like a very small delay from when you go into the solo and when the drum pattern changes, the breakdown is very cool and your soloing skills are quite the dog's.

Ambient metal?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=686981

thanks,
- Dave