#1
::type This is a song on bass ive been working on. i think its good, but im only 12

its drop d
its in 4/4
i worked on it w/ my teacher
{intro pt.1 w/ slide}


Intro pt 1

|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|
|--0-3-0-3/5-5-0-------------------0-3-0-3/5-5-0----------------|


|---------------------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------------------------|
|----0-3-0-3/5-5-5-------------------0-3-0-3/5-5-0|


|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|----0-3-0-3/5-5-7-------------------0--3--0--3/5--0------------------------------|

Intro pt.2/chorus {this part is played legato}
|------------------------|
|------------------------|
|----------------------3|
|00000000333335-| X3

|------------------------|
|------------------------|
|---------------------35|
|00000000333335-|

some sort of transition
|-----------------|
|-----------------|
|-----------------|
|0---------------|

verse (first 2 times palm-muted, last two open ALSO played legato)

|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|0-03-35-5------0531---| X4

bridge (all natural harmonics on twelfth fret)

|------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|---------12---12-------------------12-12121212-12-------12---------------------------|
|----12------------12-----------12-------------------------12-------------------------------|
|12--------------------12---12-------------------------------------12-12121212121212|


This song's order:

intro pt. 1

intro pt. 2

verse

chorus

verse

chorus

bridge

chorus X2


thats it, hope u liked it and again, id like some feedback if ud be nice enough to do that.

Attachments:
longing.zip
Last edited by westchesterbass at Apr 15, 2008,
#2
pretty hard to judge without knowing the rhythm, I'd suggest making a power tab/guitar pro file if you want feedback, it would just make things easier.
#3
^listen to that guy

but i can say that i liked your "main riff" or whatever you would wanna call it.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...