#1
I wrote this like 5 minutes ago after finding out that my ex girlfriend tried hooking me up with one of her friends just to fudge with me(since i cant curse its in the rules...) im trying to incorporate it into pop punk but i just had to write sumthing to vent my anger


(Four Leaf Clover)
Ive got some things hiding in my past
But I know I can let it all go
You just cling on to all your lies
Things that hurt from so long ago
You need to get your revenge
And its at the cost of my clear skies

Your act like the best but its all in vain
While I’m here lets talk things over
Stop lying and let up your reign
Your at a lose with nothing to gain
Wish on your four leaf clover
But it won’t do you any good
You wouldn’t take it back if you could

I find it really ironic that I’m the one to blame
It was your fault all along
You’re the one who pulled the plug
You’re the one that said so long
It’s funny how you were so smug
And when I didn’t show my emotion
It all changed and you needed the commotion

You act like the best but its all in vain
While I’m here lets talk things over
Stop lying and let up your reign
Your at a lose with nothing to gain
Wish on your four leaf clover
But it won’t do you any good
You wouldn’t take it back if you could

I find it really ironic that I’m the one to blame
It was your fault all along
You’re the one who pulled the plug
You’re the one that said so long
It’s funny how you were so smug
And when I didn’t show my emotion
It all changed and you needed the commotion

You act like the best but its all in vain
While I’m here lets talk things over
Stop lying and let up your reign
Your at a lose with nothing to gain
Wish on your four leaf clover
But it won’t do you any good
You wouldn’t take it back if you could
#2
i really like it. except at theend of the chorus. i think it just doesn't have the same rythym which makes it less good.


But it won’t do you any good
You wouldn’t take it back if you could
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maybe add even here?