#2
well, the singer caa hardly be heard, cold or no cold you guys need to play quieter or he needs to be turned up a little. Some of the transitions are a bit sloppy and the sound is a bit sloppy at time. The guitar riff is pretty sweet, the solo is cool and the bit that coems in at about 3:40 is freakin awesome

this sounds liek a pretty cool song just needs some fien tuning and some betetr recording.

crit mine?

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#3
its pretty good, it does kinda sound like tool but a little heavier, and ya the singer does need to be turned up a little, but not much, same with the drums, but im sure this wasnt recoreded in a professional studio or anything so its got good quailty for myspace. i like it