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So I'm writing this story and there comes a point where I must describe one girl's intimacy with another girl. I need to say, in more polite language, that she "made out with her and fingered her."

I need real responses but lulz will also be appreciated.
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#3
lulz
Ummm,why are you writing this story?
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#4
jou could say they kissed and preformed cunni lungus (sp?) on eachother
#5
You can't read my story, its memoirs. I'll let you read the juicy part if I get the answer I need though.
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#6
They made out for a bit, had a fiddle with the ole girl bits and they all lesboed happily ever after. The end.
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#7
do you need to say exactly what they did? you could just something like "her hand moved between her legs, gently caressing the inside of her thighs, slowly creeping upward"
#8
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jou could say they kissed and preformed cunni lungus (sp?) on eachother


They didn't perform cunnilingus.
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#9
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They made out for a bit, had a fiddle with the ole girl bits and they all lesboed happily ever after. Then end.

That sounds great. Use that.
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#10
Just pretend you are cybering with someone and write down that but put it in the third person.
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#11
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do you need to say exactly what they did? you could just something like "her hand moved between her legs, gently caressing the inside of her thighs, slowly creeping upward"


I'm not writing a porn...
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#12
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They didn't perform cunnilingus.


Yeah you're right, but it would make the story way more interesting
#15
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I'm not writing a porn...


You are, like it or not, but you are, you just havent realised it. It starts as a bit of fun, just to add something to the story. Next thing you know your righting about a catholic girls school and a new male gym teacher....
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well your first post contradicts that schneiderman


Contradicts what? Cunnilingus is with the mouth.
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You are, like it or not, but you are, you just havent realised it. It starts as a bit of fun, just to add something to the story. Next thing you know your righting about a catholic girls school and a new male gym teacher....

lmao
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#21
The two girls went for a walk.


In each others pussys.
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#22
After kissing, one gently pleasured the other?

I don't but you could watch a robin williams stand up act on viagra for inspiration....I laughed til I cried.
#23
Her lips sweetly caressed mine as I slowly ran my fingers down her body and felt myself slip inside her soft cavern of love...
#24
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pics or it didn't happen


Pics wouldn't be as interesting as you'd think, they were wearing full snowboard gear, just one had her hand in the other's pants.
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"Scissor me timbers" ?


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#26
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do you need to say exactly what they did? you could just something like "her hand moved between her legs, gently caressing the inside of her thighs, slowly creeping upward"


I like this one, it's better than just saying she fingerd her. This is descriptive, what hrdcorelaxplaya said paints a picture, hell....I get a little hot and botherd just reading it....
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So I'm writing this story and there comes a point where I must describe one girl's intimacy with another girl. I need to say, in more polite language, that she "made out with her and fingered her."

I need real responses but lulz will also be appreciated.
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do you need to say exactly what they did? you could just something like "her hand moved between her legs, gently caressing the inside of her thighs, slowly creeping upward"
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I'm not writing a porn...
Pfft! You obviously don't know what you want.
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#29
they made a passionate embrace, one caressing the other sensually, while their lips entwined in a cocoon of extacy.

hows about that?
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#31
I'll call them Emma and Sarah, since I don't know their names. Write something like:


Their lips brushed again, skin tingling and desires screaming for more. Emma's fingers softly traced down Sarah's back, feeling her skin, savouring her smooth figure. Moving her head as to gently kiss Sarah's neck she bought her hand round and made her way up her partner's voluptuous thighs, moaning softly at Sarah's sweet caressing. Her hand went further, and after pausing momentarily looking Sarah in the eye she gently entered a finger into the moist sex.


Or something.
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#32
you should post the entire story up to that point on UG, we could get a better idea of what you are looking for
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#33
I think UGers read a lot of literotica...

I'm not trying to describe how passionately she scratched the clam, I'm trying to establish that there was intimacy, and what type of intimacy it was.
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#35
say...

They snogged, she put her hand down her partner's pants, and proceeded to hammer her **** vicoiusly, causing her to moan in sheer pleasure.

#36
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I'll call them Emma and Sarah, since I don't know their names. Write something like:


Or something.



Damn man, you should write porn.
#37
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I think UGers read a lot of literotica...

I'm not trying to describe how passionately she scratched the clam, I'm trying to establish that there was intimacy, and what type of intimacy it was.

I bet there is at least one or more writer here.
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#38
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Pics wouldn't be as interesting as you'd think, they were wearing full snowboard gear, just one had her hand in the other's pants.


that mental image is still better than nothing, at least i can picture exactly what's going on now...

by the way, why does a lesbian embrace take place in your story?
#39
To quote my old English teacher.


"Teens can't write romance, or sex."


This thread seems to follow this statement.
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