This is my first attempt at creating a song...it's supposed to be death metal, but I can't do those vocals so just imagine on that front. I'm not really good enough to play a few parts well enough to sound as I had imagined it, but take a look and tell me bad things

It's on this page

hey man, it's a good start to a future in death metal... there were some actually some pretty good ideas in there... at least the quality wasn't completely terrible! haha.

keep on working on your stuff and soon enough you'll be shredding out some necrophagist or something hahahaha.