#1
have you ever thought about life
and what you wanna do one day
or are you gonna throw it away
like they expect you to do
they say your life is like a book
it takes one person to open you up
and take a look
at whats inside your mind and soul
that makes you, you
[Chorus
you want a page turning story
a fairy tale ending
starting from the beginning
and ending with happy ever after
when you get tired of one day
just turn the page for a new day
you want a prince charming to come
and sweep you off of your feet
onto his big white horse
and gallop off into the sunset
only in books can you
turn the pages] end of chorus
This song has no pattern
just like your life
a mess of dreams
and a mess of thoughts
they lead you to cinderella
or maybe snow white
living in a cottage
or a gorgeous castle
away from the worries of life
[Chorus]
Once upon a time in a far off place
lived a beautiful girl
who had a far off daze
you could see
clearly in her eyes
that she needs to get away
and taken to a land far far away
to live happily ever after with her prince
[Chorus]
You can't escape life
so don't even try
just open your book
and finish writing your story
with a happy ending
and a far away starting
[Chorus]

let me know what you think of it for a country/acoustic song!
#2
I personally despise country, but I'll try to work around that. I like the meaning of it, very clear and powerful. As for the flow.... . I don't know how it sounds, but if it sounds odd to say at all with the song, you need to change the flow drastically. Again, I'm a headbanger, so country lyrics are probably much different. So change flow if it sounds bad, other than that, good job.
Your head slowly caves in from the compression