#1
Hey, guys. Here's a song I wrote for my new demo No Flashlight. You can hear it here Tin Man.

Factory has built you inside out
With a plastic brain
And a borrowed name
No hope remains

If you come looking for me I won't be home
I'll be alone
Out on my own
A one way telephone

Why do you feel so strange and distant?
Are your eyes tinted?
Well, you hinted at a heart you found
That no one needs to know about

I'll see you around.
#2
pretty cool, i really liked it actually, its the type of music i really get into (folkish). The lyrics were really cool, but it felt like like some of it was a little forced sounding, (the last lines on the first two stanzas) but i think it was just because the type of rhyming pattern used.

P.S. what kind of guitar & mic did you use to record that?
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String
#4
sure, if you'd like...if you have other stuff to do i'd do that instead though haha...its kinda ****ty: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=11074631#post11074631

btw thats a really nice tone you got for how much you spent!
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String