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Yeah, So I wrote a new piece, its pretty forward and simple. Just looking for some constructive crit. (C4C also, please leave link)

Some Other Way

Verse 1
so you've got the best of me
you took off all your clothes
we saw the clown you really were
behind the smile was just a decaying rose

Chorus
I guess this way you wont get hurt
spending every night with some other pervert
Happiness will find you someday
I just hope its in some other way

Verse 2
I would have been there for you
but you felt the desire to stay alone
thats okay, but you didn't have to lead me on
not everyones heart is made of stone

Bridge
I could be wrong
maybe your flying high
maybe your strong
but then why do you spend your nights constantly cryin'?

Verse 3
I heard a warning from everyone who knew you
but theres no denying, your good
could have had me eating out of your hand
but lucky for me, i was just misunderstood

Chorus
I guess this way you wont get hurt
spending every night with some other pervert
Happiness will find you someday
I just hope its in some other way
70's Japan Greco SuperPower
Amps: '65 TRRI - Peavey Classic 50 4x10 - Epiphone VJ Head (Modded) - 2x12 Celestion Greenback Cab
FX: BK Tube Driver - EH Small Stone - MXR CC
Acoustics: Breedlove ADSM20 - Alveraz 5021 12-String