I just made this and it's pretty mellow. I'm a guitar n00b, but I think I did an adequate job. The song is in my profile, called "Mellow and Stuff." Please tell me what you think.
I actually like it man. Even though the chord tone sounds a bit "off", I think it sounds like an old Hammond B3, and I love organs. I noticed you went out of time on the first chord change, but you recovered nicely, good job. Another riff that really stuck out like a sore thumb (in a bad way ) is a little ditty you did at 54 seconds. Other than that, you have some pretty good soloing in there for a beginner, I think it should have been slightly louder, so as to cut through the chords (boost mid-highs, mids if you only have 3 bands), and it would sound great!