these are little riffs i came up with. i was wondering if it was any good. It's sorta metallish.

Leave a link please(for the C4C)

EDIT: new part added.

EDIT: another new part added.
Metal Riff 7.zip
Last edited by British_Steal at Oct 15, 2007,
pretty cool riff, nice use of odd time signatures
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killswitch engage has some dissonant riffs, they're kind grindcore tho

Wow, insane time sigs there!! xD

Anyways, the first riff was really good, I liked it alot.
Next riff was good too, nothing special though but bar 5-6 were my favorite for sure. But maybe try to put an A.H on the last note? I thought it sounded much cooler ^^ Just an idea!

Mind to crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=675687