wow man. that was sweet. the only part i didnt like that much was the pre-solo and the transition into the solo. everything else was solid. i guess the guitar just made too much of a jump in pitch into the solo. not sure how you might fix that. but great job! i wish i could write like this.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
This is amazing... I didn't really like bar 17 though.

I loved the riff at bar 36.

I didn't really like the first solo, but the second one was awesome. The bass solo was pretty good too.

Meh, I didn't really like the ending either (bar 61). Seemed weak compared to the rest of the song.

Last edited by RedDeath9 at Oct 16, 2007,
Dude, awesome. You must play bass, or listen to a lot of jazz, because that bass was right on. The only thing I would say to improve is the guitar, although i don't really like power chords over funk that much, but that might be the style your going for.

That bar of 2/4 right before the 1st theme is so awesome, so funky. It gives you that feeling of "here it comes!" really well put together. Nice drums and drum fills as well, so good dude.

Funky, definitely. 9.5/10

4/4 is just so boring. <_<
Dude that was bad ass, really funky. Some of the parts I could see Pantera using too, haha. The only part I didn't really like was the ending, I thought it was kind of abrupt, but over all really cool
AWSOME stuff man.
i admire you.
awsome bass you have here, and the guitar is also cool.
the solo is amazing, i realy liked the way you've puted the bas and guitar solos one after another. really funky, jumpy kinda.

overall, 9.5/10.
you're a talent, even if cant play this(though im sure you can).

btw, C4C a song from my sig, plz?
crit my songs, (PLZ):
[thread="660867"]Out Of The Darkness[/thread]