This is just a first,and very rough draft to a song. There's some borrowed lyrics at the end incase someone recognizes them. crits and comments please

Every morning’s another morning of us mourning
And I have yet to find something consoling
Or the “greater reason” for this whole thing
It’s so hard to keep in touch
When you’re so far out of reach
And people tell us “it’s ok, just remember and pray”
And we listen while they preach
But this is the final break, this is the leech
Slowly draining us day by day
This is God’s wrath
I am defused
I have lost my charge
I am degaussed