#1
your voice is better than mine
i'll never make it alive
the time is over and done
that doesn't mean i'm the one

(pre chorus)
judging you by your looks to kill
taking away my will to live

(chorus)
over and goe there's no way
don't push, i wanna stay
no matter what you have done
i don't care i am still the one

i am you worst enemy
you will get no symapthy
i dare not speak your name
nobody wins at your game

(pre-chorus)
never enough for me to give
giving it up its me you kill

(chorus)
over and gone there is no way
don't push, i wanna stay
no matter what you have done
i don't care i am still the one



hope you guys like it
#2
While I can relate to some of it, it's a rather bipolar song, isn't it? I mean, you have the verses which all say "Don't come close, I'm not the one" and then there's the chorus with "I want to stay close, I'm the one." It kinda confuses the reader/listener as to what to feel. I have to say though, I liked the first verse... lines. They had bitter resentment, with grudging admiration all mixed up in one sharp dose, but then you go on for the rest of the song going "no, I don't... wait, yes I do... do I?" My advice is to step back, focus on what you really want to write, and let it come out.