#3
dude your double posting all over the place!

edit: I like some of the songs though, and drugs arent cool man!
#5
she is so slutty looking i bet she bangs his friends while he practices but some nice songs you have though
#6
Quote by sidereal9
she is so slutty looking i bet she bangs his friends while he practices but some nice songs you have though


Not cool, don't put someone else down you don't know and he didn't bring up...

I'd personally advise you to lay off the drugs, its a hard habit to kick, or if you find it necessary to be sky high, keep it to yourself... (different people view these boards)

Songs are good, the effects give them a trippy feeling (hmm I wonder what inspired you to write them like that??)

It's a little too cluttered, slow it down, write something we can listen to and pick up a melody from....

Good work, and stay safe
#7
blue influenza: nice job with this. very trippy, and very floydian. a more deffinative bass line would be nice. if you'd like i could do one for you some time? nice soloing. you should do some songs with vocals? some of the leads were a bit awkward in timing. i like your tone and proggresiveness.

crit mien? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=11183688#post11183688
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