#1
Stop looking down on me
Cuz I ain’t gonna look up at you
I get to be who I wanna be
It’s right there in my liberties

I’m not looking back
Cuz I know what I’m missing
Thousands of should have beens
That once had nothing but hopes and dreams

I've got the keys to the world in my hand
Maybe someday i'll help you understand
that you got to work for what you've got to say
I couldn't care what road i go down i just need to get away


not finished..

criticise please.
Guitars gear
Fender Nashville Telecaster
Vox AD30 Valvetronix
Zoom 707 multi effects
Last edited by slash=legend at Oct 17, 2007,
#2
its alright but ur trying to rhyme to much
ug's cool so i guess im cool to

Originally Posted by gallagher2006
Whats a Steve Vai? Floyd Rose ripoff?

Originally Posted by Virgil_Hart05
no...stop being fat
#3
yeah ano, i listen to the likes of oasis, verve, dodgems, the q, johnny cash, and they rhyme.
Guitars gear
Fender Nashville Telecaster
Vox AD30 Valvetronix
Zoom 707 multi effects