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This is something I wrote while ago, and I would like to get people's opinions on it, many thanks

Raining from the heavens
Across the sacred land
A figure oh so chivalrous suddenly appeared
With a broadsword in his hand

The beast has come
And nobody can win
The beast has come
To wash away our sins

The villagers begin to run
Trying to evade him
The beast will stop them in their tracks
And rip them limb from limb

The beast has come
And nobody can win
The beast has come
To wash away our sins

There's no more hope for those that sin
The beast will come, and do them in

They may try, to run and hide
But there's no hope, they all will die

Guitar Solo

The beast has come
And nobody can win
The beast has come
To wash away our sins

The beast has come
And nobody can win
The beast has come
To wash away our sins

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Last edited by ClimhazzardX at Oct 17, 2007,