#3
it would definitely sound better played on an acoustic...but other than that i thought it was pretty enjoyable. the vocals are incredibly clear, i thought you had a decent voice. you easily stayed on key and the tone of your voice is actually pretty good. the guitar could've been a little smoother. other than that, good job! especially the singing.

crit me?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=693398