This is really the first thing I have ever written for the bass, it's just a small thing I came up with while playing this morning. I hope you guys like it.
hey, i thought it was pretty cool. keep going with it. try adding some guitar or drums or keyboard or anything to back it up.

and i hope you don't mind, but i kinda changed it up a little, not much. what do you think?

and sorry if you dont like the fact that I messed with your song, but i just couldn't resist carrying it a bit further.

oh, and i thought it sounded better at 240bpm
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
Yeah, after going through my music collection, I admit its similar to the guitar riff from the Nobodies by Marilyn Manson, though that wasn't intentional.

Also Its_rock don't worry about it, it's cool that you though it was good enough to be worked on

Also attatched to this post is a zip with a midi file in, sorry that I couldnt work out how to do *.gp4