#1
i was sitting in class the other day and started coming up with things in my head.. i ran home and quickly got them down on paper. please tell me what you think. this is ONLY the chorus.. I think the chorus is the most important part and people will remember it the most.. plus i haven't had the inspiration yet for the verses and so on. please tell me what you think and if you have any inputs or constructive criticism please feel free. thanks


CHORUS

Because of you I’ll show my face
I’m no longer afraid
Cause you’ve found my hiding place
In this crowded masquerade
And it’s time I realize
To see your point view
Take off the mask and show my eyes
And it’s all because you
#2
Nice man. I think itd sound a little better if you did like:

Because of you I’ll show my face
I’m no longer afraid
Cause you’ve found my hiding place
In this crowded masquerade
And ive finally realized
Ive seen your point of view
Ive taken off the mask and shown my eyes
And it’s all because you

or something like that. But its fine the way you have it too if you dont wanna change. Good job man.

Heres mine if you get a chance
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=695262
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