#1
kind of indy style music
like fast talking it goes wlel with music but are the lyrics ok

this is the first one

Crammy Land (crammy = cramlington where i live)


Verse
Wanna go down to Spar mate?
Aye, lets hope she wont be late
Lets gan get a chippy
Aye thene well go down to Aldi
Now that We are bored again
wanna go meet her at the den
Aye mate
Lets hope she wont be late

Chorus
Somerfield,ASDA,Sainsburys!
Howay then lets go buy some of these
All the Trends
and all the styles
H&M have piles and piles
Aldi, Iceland, Coscutters!
All the workers are complete nutters
All the sweets
All the magz
None of these have clothes tags

Verse
Wanna go down to Macyd's
Or stay at home, I've got the keys
aye but gan get iz a coke
Aye, no sugar, or just a coke?
Neither mate I've changed me mind
but you crammy lads are really kind
tar mate
never mind


repeats chorus again


it sounds a bit like a storry here but with music it soudns cany good


Heres my 2nd song which is slightly better


Skinny Fit Jeans
Chorus
She has skinny Fit jeans
and a band-tee on
I watch her from the corner
She wonders what I'm on


Verse
I always liked the way she dressed,
and how she never ever made a mess
I like her dark brown hair
and her underwear


Chorus


Verse 2
I hate it how she looks at me
As if I am a total freak
She doesnt like me toooday (pronunciation)
not tomrow either
k?

Chorus
She has skinny Fit jeans
and a band-tee on
I never watch her from the corner
I wonder what shes on


working progress really
views appreciated
GEAR!

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Last edited by Alexnewman123 at Oct 21, 2007,
#3
Quote by shintyboyiain
the first one wth all the sops name is a bit sort of............. but i liked the second one
yeh im not happy with the first one
i dont see there terrible but i couldnt think of could stuff ya no?
but the first one sounds a lot better with music ill give you that
GEAR!

Ibanez GRG170DX
Fender Stratocaster
Vintage Wilkinson SG
Stagg SW206CE-BK
Westfield PB bass
Boss ME-50
Behdringer-UD100
Digitech RP50
Marshall 50 watt
Carlsbro kick start 12w
Marshall mini m2
WWW.myspace.com/runawayjesusband