#1
Skinny Fit Jeans
Chorus
She has skinny Fit jeans
and a band-tee on
I watch her from the corner
She wonders what I'm on


Verse
I always liked the way she dressed,
and how she never ever made a mess
I like her dark brown hair
and her underwear


Chorus


Verse 2
I hate it how she looks at me
As if I am a total freak
She doesnt like me toooday (pronunciation)
not tomrow either
k?

Chorus
She has skinny Fit jeans
and a band-tee on
I never watch her from the corner
I wonder what shes on
Last edited by Alexnewman123 at Oct 22, 2007,
#2
no offence, i am a pop punk lover as well
but its just to cookie cutter for my taste
it doesnt bring anything blink 182 hasnt already

keep on, keeping on
#3
Quote by Blink_Freak3
no offence, i am a pop punk lover as well
but its just to cookie cutter for my taste
it doesnt bring anything blink 182 hasnt already

keep on, keeping on


in my opinion blink is an offense to punk.
#6

I always liked the way she dressed,
and how she never ever made a mess
I like her dark brown hair
and her underwear


That seem a little to unoriginal a rhyme for me personally, but the whole Blink thing is fun and you seem to write in that general spirit so keep it up, never stop writing!
#7
Quote by lordofthefood1
he said pop punk?

hm you're right, i think i missed that part
#8
Quote by izaguF
hm you're right, i think i missed that part


You have a point though. Thy dont deserve to use the word "punk" as their genre, and the fact that it is coupled with "pop" only makes it worse. Pop-Punk is an idiotic oxymoron. Punk is the opposite of pop. Its the same with "indie" these days. It used to mean "independent", and now it means "catchy guitar pop".
Thats exactly what I got when I read this. It felt completely disposable, forgettable, and quite frankly, unoriginal. Sorry.