#1
Something I jotted down in about 2 minutes or so, thoughts?

Loki's Awakening

The earth begins to quake
Trees are uprooted from the ground
An ancient evil is rising
He will soon to lay waste to all around
The snakes venom no longer torments him
He is free from his pain
He rides with hel and her warriors
To fight against man again

[Guitar Solo]

Onwards, to vigrid
To meet his predetermined fate
An epic battle of with the god Heimdall
This he cannot escape

[Bridge]

It will prove to be a grueling contest
One they won't survive
They will both fall on the battlefield
As Ragnarök rages on

[guitar solo that closes song]
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#2
Good ol' fashioned Odinist lyrics never go bad.

Keep rockin'.
#3
Thanks man! I really appreciate that, I figured I'd get bashed to hell.. I'm not much of a song writer, but nobody else in the band wants to so I figure, **** it. Time to take initiative.
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Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
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Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION
#5
Not a bad one really, songs that tell tales never really go amiss (Tenacious D - Wonderboy goes along the same lines, probably why it reminds Minkaro of it). If you could find some way to put more rhymes in it without getting rid of the feel of the song, it would be brilliant.
#6
Bit of a revision.. Tell me, should I go with this or the previous?

The earth begins to quake
Trees are uprooted from the ground
An ancient evil is rising
He will soon to lay waste to all around
The snakes venom no longer torments him
He is free from his pain
He rides with hel and her warriors
To fight against man again


[Guitar Solo]

Onwards, to vigrid
To meet his predetermined fate
An epic battle of with the god Heimdall
This he cannot escape

[Bridge]

Many men fall at his feet
In his mind, he'll never face defeat
In this distance he sees Heimdall
The guardian of the Gjallhorn
He rushes to great him with sword in hand
As he shouts, "I FEAR NO MAN"

The two engage in battle
Though he crushed Loki's skull
He was dealt a fatal wound
They both die on the battlefield
Ragnarök will end soon..
My gear
Ibanez RG7321
Jackson Warrior WRXT *FS/FT*
Jasmine J35
Squier Fender P-Bass
Ibanez TBX150H
Crate 4x12
Fender Rumble 60


Part of UG's 7 STRING LEGION