#1
Hey guys,
I've been working with a new song, and finally made some text..Perhaps my english isn't that good, because it is my 2nd language, please correct some gramar things, and tell me what you think about it
thanks

Verse 1
Like aliens landed in apple trees
Just laugh your life out honestly
you can never be yourself
It wasn’t what you meant
my shotgun is reloaded
waiting for you to turn back
and now you stand in front of my landscape

Verse 2
I’ll think we’re going down in madness
Just live the last seconds
You’ll get eaten and will never be found
I was lost in darkness but something came near me
I thought I saw a light
that looked at me with those pretty eyes

Chorus
and in_side those pretty eyes
they came for me
they shined for me
And in_side those pretty eyes
I saw your little face
fading out….
radiohead
#2
Reported for title. But i will help you anyway .

Like aliens landed in apple treesWhat does this line mean?
Just laugh your life out honestly
you can never be yourself
It wasn’t what you meant
my shotgun is reloaded
waiting for you to turn back
and now you stand in front of my landscape

Verse 2
I’ll think we’re going down in madness
Just live the last seconds
You’ll get eaten and will never be found
I was lost in darkness but something came near me
I thought I saw a light
that looked at me with those pretty eyes. I'm not sure how light can look at you, but yeah i'll go with it

Chorus
and inside those pretty eyes
they came for me
they shined for me
And inside those pretty eyes
I saw your little face
fading out….

Apart from a few glitches, your grammar is ok. Give me some instructions on where you want your song to go and i can crit it better )