#1
This is my first time writing lyrics, so any feedback would be helpful, thanks

Blinded by the person I once knew
The Truth shrouded in mystery

Woah is this real or dream
Now I don't know what to believe
This empathy is killing me
until i can see through the dark

Distorted reality, far from absolute
My heart filled with empty promises

Woah is this real or dream
Now I don't know what to believe
This empathy is killing me
until i can see through the dark

And I know this can't be pure
The end is in sight

Woah is this real or dream
Now I don't know what to believe
This empathy is killing me
until i can see through the dark
The dark...
#2
i dunno. the "Woah"s might get a little old to hear. instead of using that approch maybe try something like "tell me is this real or dream" or just get rid of the kick off word all together "is this real or am i dreaming?"it can go a whole bunch of ways... but its all about how you want it to sound. so aside from my critisism.. good work. :]