we just wrote this song for our band and i just want to know what you guys think of it.

Screams can be heard through these walls

In a trashed apartment

A couple on their last straw

Cigarette smoke stains the lungs

Through years of screaming

He has fought as one

He says this is the end

His mind is set

To the roof he ascends

Never looking back on the things he said

She screams through a dirty throat

(Crying eyes) a pale blue now turned to grey

(She said) if you jump I jump too

A tragic end but the love was true

Then they expected miracles (x5)

They jumped side by side

A lovely grey eyed suicide

They jumped side by side

Life is a blur covered in bruises
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