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this is my second song i've written, any feedback would be really appreciated

Knocked to the ground, missing teeth
Her body lies in a heap
She cries 'no more' (no more)
as she lays on the floor

Why does she take this abuse?
Everyday is a new excuse
He arrives home, flowers in grasp
Once again, he locks their clasp

She awakes the next day
Her once chance to get away
She packs her things (her things)
and leaves her wedding rings

Days pass before she returns
All that time away she yearned (for him)
She pounds on the front door
and she's on the floor
She pulls out her gun (she pulls out her gun)
Quickly pulls the trigger (pulls the trigger)
He fades into the after life
She is no longer his wife