#1
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so this is definately my first song...and i wrote this little bit can you give me some opinions constructive critisism?
GRUNDY0!

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#2
I can't speak for everybody, but I think we need more to go on before we can help you. How is this supposed to be played? Loud and fast? Soft and mellow? I fiddled around with it, playing it different ways, and it sounds like a decent way to begin. You'll need more before you can call it a full-fledged song of course, but I think you're off to a fine start for a first song...
#3
I could see it being an intro to a song...but like theoneandonlyq said..lol..wed need more before we could help you. but nice work..Sounds nice to me =)