#1
Hey guys. This is my first song ever singing and writing. It's a rough recording right now but it has a solo in it. This was the first draft of the song, I was just wanting to know if anyone thinks it has any potential.

Thanks guys.

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#2
It's good! I like it. The last part of the solo is my favorite part. Just a little more convincing signing and I would give it a 5/5.

4/5!!

When you get it done, post again please!
#3
Not bad! You'll need to build up a lot more confidence with the actual singing,but the song itself is very well written... and if you can pick up a cheap USB condenser mic and do the vox on a separate track it'd give you a much higher quality demo.
Btw, I liked the solo - the playing sounded rather wooden (due to the lack of vibrato/bends), but I like the fact that it was tasteful rather than mindless shredding up and down! Some of the best players can say it all using just four or five notes...
#4
Reminds me of eagle eye cherry, a little. It sounds pretty good, like the comments above the singing can definitely be improved.
#5
Thanks a lot. Ive been working on it, but im having trouble recording it on 2 tracks. My mic does suck, but its not terrible. And i think i may add a lead part on top for the intro and chorus cause the chords for this aren't very original. Good idea?
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