#1
A death metal song...enjoy.

Raw flesh of the living
Serves to quench my hunger.
But to satiate my sexual lust,
Nothing is akin to
Necrotic flesh

Nothing works better than
Necrotic flesh
Nothing compares to
The feeling of congealed blood
And the soft sweet texture
Of necrotic flesh

Mortuaries are where I spend my days
Cemetaries are my only sanctuaries
The gates of hell remain open,
But they reject me into perputual darkness
Angels cry blood and I drink with glee.


Nothing works better than,
Necrotic flesh.
Nothing compares to
The feeling of congealed blood
And the soft sweet texture
Of necrotic flesh

Torture and chains are only foreplay,
The knife is the last sex toy you will see.
I consume your last breath,
And I scream with desire for
Necrotic flesh



Criticize if you want, admire if you please, forget if that's your wish.
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#2
Mmmm tasty, lol


Sounds good for a death metal song, but kinda scary for anything else, lol
#3
eew. i was cringing the whole time i was reading this. so, if that's what you were goin for, well done! i dont really know what else to say...
#4
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eew. i was cringing the whole time i was reading this. so, if that's what you were goin for, well done! i dont really know what else to say...

yep thats the point. pure shock
like this guy says
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Mmmm tasty, lol


Sounds good for a death metal song, but kinda scary for anything else, lol

intended for death metal usage only, no bluesy soft-rock...itd be too poppy
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intended for death metal usage only, no bluesy soft-rock...itd be too poppy


Like this guy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fc-V3NYckOI
hHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHhA
damn, when i saw the title i expected Richard CHeese and Lounge Against the Machine
hahahahah epic lols hahahahahhaha
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#7
hehe.. i dunno, it'd be good to see justin timberlake whip up a dance routine to this.

complete with dismembered cadavers.
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#9
sorry, but your style of death metal lyrics is very cliche. There's more to death than dead flesh fetishes. Make it more creative.
#10
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sorry, but your style of death metal lyrics is very cliche. There's more to death than dead flesh fetishes. Make it more creative.

aww dude...this is like 3 years old when i was getting into death metal. and i like it, so yea...
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#12
I get the feeling (and I hope I am right) that you are writing about this from the abstract, having never partaken yourself. This is the way it comes off. Oooooh, gory, scarey, shocking, oooooh, I don’t think so. Step up the game. You can do better.
#13
I get the feeling (and I hope I am right) that you are writing about this from the abstract, having never partaken yourself. This is the way it comes off. Oooooh, gory, scarey, shocking, oooooh, I don’t think so. Step up the game. You can do better.
#15
i thought it was fit for death metal. cannibal corpse lite, if you will. not utterly revolting, but still disgusting. it was kinda cliche, though. not very creative. you could probably do better.

Jack my swag
#16
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man, this lyric doesn't sound good. metal music doesn't have to be trash. take a look at some chevelle lyrics. at least be sophisticated. in person, unless you're a crazy perv this probablly isn't from your heart. write something that really means something to you.. not just trash

well of course metal lyrics dont have to be what you call "trash"
this is a DEATH metal song.
for DEATH metal music
not alternative/nu-metal
not for power metal
not for hair metal
or any other kind of metal
DEATH metal
which is an actual genre if you didnt know thats been around since the late 80's, a few years before bands like chevelle were on the scene
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I get the feeling (and I hope I am right) that you are writing about this from the abstract, having never partaken yourself. This is the way it comes off. Oooooh, gory, scarey, shocking, oooooh, I don’t think so. Step up the game. You can do better.

i feel i can use this quote to address your doubt

"Cocaine's a helluva drug...he he he"
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