#1
Didn't cover the entire song just a quick portion. Messed around with synthesizers in it to...so much fun.

So onto the March, it's on my profile. Hope you guys like it.
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#2
Heh, cool intro.
Sounded to me like your second part was in a different key than your first part. When you went to the higher note of the riff, you didn't go high enough, and that ended up screwing you up. You've got a sweet guitar tone, and what you have sounds incredibly heavy. Learn the whole thing, get it recorded! I'd love to hear you do a full-on metal cover of it.
But like I said, learn the part right. I really think you're ending in a different key than you start out in.
Other than that, great start! Headbangin'... just the way I like it.
#3
Thanks for the kind words lol. It does sound off there, so when I get ready to do the final cut I've got a note for that. :-)
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#4
This is really cool..
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#5
It's sounds ok, but kinda short; and the intro was too quiet.
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#6
Final cut won't have that steady buzz with it. I think that hurt the overal breathing (which has already been fixed) .
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#7
Not too shabby. Learn the whole thing!
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#8
yeah, when you went into the second part it went into a different key...

but when you were playing the final chords right at the end, they sounded kind of detuned, or like....corrupted? haha

I can't think of an appropriate word.

it makes me think that the different key and "corrupted" chords were perhaps intentional, for the metal effect?
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